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Time for a little loving, poetry style

Posted by greatwh1teshark - February 4th, 2010


Don't know why, but for some reason I just fancy writing some poems about love, so if any girls see this, please let me know what you think.

Love is Lost poem: By Jack Longman

It is such a shame that our love run out,
relationship end after a the days of scream and shout.
Love is lost, love is gone,
for our love is over time to move on.
What started out to be great, I really thought you were my soul mate.
But now I realize it is all over forgot you I shall not,
to future I promise to give love all I've got.

Love is Kind: By Jack Longman

Love is beautiful love is kind,
when you're not in the room I go blind.
Love is like gambling don't be afraid to roll the dice,
just being with you is like paradise.
Your trust and respect I am earning,
all about you I am yearning to do some learning.
Nothing can separate us not even Death and his scythe,
let me tell you all the things I love about the love of my life.

I love the way her voice softens and her mouth opens when she says my name,
she is my prize for playing love's game.
I love the way she turns a bad day great.
loving the how how every day is like a first date.
I could be full of rage and then she comes along and I walk on rainbow.
when with her I write like the great Edgar Allen Poe.
Her eyes like ocean pearls,
she is a women amongst girls.

Posses a body to die for,
a moment with her and I begin to soar.
Her lips they are just divine,
one kiss from her makes everything fine.
When together nothing matters but me and my love,
she has the beauty the grace and elegance like a white dove.
Everything about her body is shapely and right,
not even the Gods could break us try if they might.

A Hapless Romantics Poem: By Jack Longman
(Dedicated to my friend Harley Lingerfelt)

Love is an emotion you'll experience at any age,
it is something to be written on an empty page.
Truly is the greatest thing you'll ever know,
bringing you more happiness then money and dough.
Open to all whether you find it or it finds you,
and when it comes choice is yours on what you do.
Everywhere you go you'll always find love,
because it flies around like a majestic dove.

Don't get me wring love isn't perfect it has it's ups and downs,
you'll know you're in trouble when lover frowns.
It can bring you happiness or make you sad,
one moment in perfect bliss and then completely mad.
It isn't perfect requiring a lot of work from both sides.
like oceans waves love is like moving tides.
Love is many things but never is it stupid,
I count myself lucky I was struck by arrow from Cupid.

Love is brilliant love is great,
you truly are my soul mate.
Chosen by the stars to be together forever,
our love is for eternity extinguish never.
Nothing shall separate us for we are always one,
you are the moon and I am the sun.
If our life were a movie it'll be Titanic with us as Jack and Rose,
with each passing day my love for you it always grows.


Comments

Let me guess making a poem for your gf for Valentine's Day!

No, helping a mate who is having difficulties with his one so he asked me to help out and write a poem for him. Women are complicated.